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Post by Iio on Oct 14, 2006 14:04:23 GMT -5
wow , analeiss, you tattle tale. lol, yah, and someone riding a dragon that could just fly his or her own self would be retarded. making a couple polls, please vote in them.
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Post by dementedlilpuppet on Oct 14, 2006 14:12:25 GMT -5
Oo, polls. Polls are fun.
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Post by Iio on Oct 14, 2006 14:18:11 GMT -5
see, I want the second one in the poll, because if you want your character to look evil, have streched skin like a shade, and have black wings, you can have that, but for those who dont want that, like me, you dont have to have that.
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Post by Kono Slaker on Oct 14, 2006 15:00:15 GMT -5
the thing is when Apia posted 'why can't people be from the empire? why can't people be evil?' everyone was behind her or most were. These would be the closest thing to it while being evil per say and as skilled as an elf but still fighting on the same side as the Varden.....for now.
These were going to be the evil people that everyone was asking for.
Now they don't have to be as evil or stupid as my description that was just my idea for a history and a plot.
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Post by Iio on Oct 14, 2006 15:03:23 GMT -5
yah, but cant some people just be Kreeshone, cause I dont want my rebel leader kreeshone to be evil, but, its personal choice, if some kreeshone like what the empire does, go ahead and join it, but not every should have to be evil or bad ya know? lol
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Post by Kono Slaker on Oct 14, 2006 15:12:35 GMT -5
they aren't evil they are greedy. it's like you said peaceful until provoked I'm just adding 'or they find out you have something they want.' part before the 'if provoked well consider yourself dead.'
Now some can be against it but can do nothing to openly oppose it. Lile maybe to join the cause they must swear not to tell their enemies about their plans or do anything to intentionally hurt the cause.
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Post by Iio on Oct 14, 2006 15:29:57 GMT -5
well, the swearing of the secrecy, isnt that kinda like the varden?
and why can't the kreeshone just be normal? Lol. I can see that you obviously want something bad about them, so, how about instead of greed, the are uncompromising (the best I could come up with) and mercy - less.
cause if they were the above, they could still be normal, and peaceful until provoked, but if you wage war against them, or they you, they wont feel bad about slaughtering your women, children, and nothing you say will stop them.
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Post by Kono Slaker on Oct 14, 2006 15:40:45 GMT -5
we'll leave it too the vote. neither of us can convince the other we shall let the people decide. lol
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Post by denetrius on Oct 14, 2006 15:50:00 GMT -5
lol, alright.
now, about the name of the group. We need to decide this or put it to the vote.
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Post by arya150 on Oct 14, 2006 15:58:58 GMT -5
ooh, new polls.
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Post by Kono Slaker on Oct 14, 2006 16:00:43 GMT -5
A Vote it is. I will make it and explain it.
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Post by ladea on Oct 16, 2006 10:59:08 GMT -5
so, the votes have answered. Now what? is how the polls resulted how everything is going to go?
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Post by Iio on Oct 16, 2006 11:37:57 GMT -5
alright, well, since it seems the polls have been decided, i will start writing a rough draft plot thing, and I am calling the reb group
Du Athan
for Du means the in the ancient language, and it needs a the, but The Athan seems stupid, for you are mixing the ancient language with human. And beyond by itself seems stupid
it sounds stupid, the beyond, but when you say it in a sentence.
"Will you join Du Athan?" 'Will you join the Beyond?'
as compared to
"Will you join Athan?" 'Will you join Beyond?'
**alright** here it is**
of course, it is VERY rough around the edges, and will need MUCH editing, but the more detailed general idea.
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The wild dragon in Vroengard has just been slaughtered by the group of Riders. The Riders now travel to Du Weldenvarden to start, and hopefully complete, their training.
*** A Kreeshone, having lived in the Beor Mountains for over 15 years, is now angry at Galbatorix, for if he, or his tribe tried to leave the Beors, Galbtorix would surely try to kill him, or make him join his forces, which he would not do. He started to rally people, not discriminating against race. He traveled all over Alagaesia, collecting warriors and soldiers, building himself an army. He had a good amount of warriors and soldiers alike, about one thousand. He had made them gather in the back of the Beors, somewhere near where Farthen Dur is. After 5 years of gathering, he went back there for a final time. He started to march west, bringing the army with him. He showed up at Surda, and telling the army to stay hidden in the desert near Aberon until he returns. He went into Aroughs and immediately found Nasuada’s palace. He asked to chat with Nasuada, and had his wish granted. He sat down with her. “What would you say if I told you I could bring riches to the Varden. I could bring about one thousand able bodied warriors and combine them with yours to make one huge Empire against Galbatorix?” The Kreeshone asked. “I would say welcome.” came Nasuada’s reply. And so, the next day, when he returned with his army of one thousand, he was immedaitly treated with respect and royalty, and was called “Sir.” He was rewarded with his own servants, and his own room in the same palace as Nasuada. And so, with the new rebel group, called Du Athan, living in Surda, and having brought all their riches to the country, the Six Sects, or the Riders, Du Athan, The Varden, Surda, The Elves, and The Dwarves, all met at Surda, and planned the ultimate downfall of the Empire. They would finally rid Alagaesia of the evil King.
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Post by Kono Slaker on Oct 16, 2006 16:05:43 GMT -5
why are you drafting it when the votes aren't in?
and Athan is Elfish from The Lord of the Rings trilogy not ancient language from Inheritance (Aranel explained all)
plus the votes aren't in for the plot either or the appearance.
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Post by Iio on Oct 16, 2006 16:07:18 GMT -5
Oh, I missed the Athan part - lol. - whatever, then why are we using it? But even still, Du Athan still sounds cool.
and for the polls. Who else is going to vote? everyone who will vote has voted already.
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